Poem ‘What Goes Around’
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What Goes Around
At last I can leave
the window ajar
to sense those languid
sounds of the street
like life itself returning
from some distant place
a world woken up
by a warm gentle kiss
Promise too in the bee’s
tender tap on my window
busy on beatnik rounds –
I am wishing him luck
on a maverick wind
in the cool melodious rain
poem and image © copyright David Francis Barker 2011
*First published in Shot Glass Journal in 2011
Excellent. “A world woken up by a warm gentle kiss” is comforting.
Hi,
Very nice poem.
Your poem makes me think of the early hours of a morning, everything is just so quite, and then the world wakes.
Thank you so much!
Thank you very much again for your comments.
Wonderful poem and photograph celebrating about-to-be-spring warmth.
This is a painting in words David – beautiful
“like life itself returning from some distant place” – I can actually hear this, it’s amazing.
Christine
Sounds purrfect…..the busy bees and the gentle music in the air….its so comforting blissful lazy mornings. Beautiful poetry David
Granbee, thank you very much!
Thank you once again Christine!
I’m grateful to you Soma, thank you!
So peaceful. I love the bee against the window – superb!
The bee as beatnik… wonderful metaphor. Jane
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so lovely and tender…can see the window scene with all its layers and just love..the bee’s tender tap…
I love how you created imagery through this poem, it’s beautiful…
Thank you!
Thank you!!!
Mira, thank you so much, I’m grateful.
Thank you again Claudia!
Thank you very much!
Beautiful, and love the pic with it…purrrfect!!! LOL
Ah! Thank you so much!
Spring is in the air? Beautiful cat.
Linda, thank you very much! Yes, let’s hope so, in the Northern Hemisphere at any rate!
Nicely done ! Our cats also await the warm gentle kiss of freedom. Alas, one neighbour has chosen to keep informing the cat-police if our poor creatures out. So they sit by the kitchen window watching other cats who are unidentified visit our yard- even with the snow..
So soothing and makes me smile, like ready to begin a new day of possibilities…love this verse:
Promise too in the bee’s
tender tap on my window
busy on beatnik rounds –
I am wishing him luck
and your image is perfect, too, David~
Cat police? Good heavens. I am very grateful for you comments – thank you!
Lauren, I’m very grateful to you, thank you!
Ah, you made me long for the opening of a window…
What a beautiful cat! One of mine is always begging me to open a window…he thinks if the sun is shining there must be nice warm air and inviting scents to let in!
Thank you so much!!!
I love this one
Thank you!!!!