‘Haiku 2012 #1’

galactic crosshairs
fire in a frigid hole
no sure repentance

©copyright dfbarker 2011

*first of a few of these, I may stray from the ‘accepted’.

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11 comments

  1. ♡ The Tale Of My Heart ♡ · December 31, 2011

    Happy New Year 2012,,,, have fun 🙂

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  2. magsx2 · December 31, 2011

    Hi,
    Have a great New Year. 🙂

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  3. claudia · December 31, 2011

    sometimes good to stray from the “accepted”… enjoyed this..

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  4. dancingantelope · December 31, 2011

    Lovely! I wrote one book of haiku several years ago. A collection of my impressions of living in a new landscape…I printed it at home and hand-sewed and bound a set of ten small books. It was great fun 🙂 Haiku are wonderful for seeing the essence…for boiling down the sauce.

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  5. granbee · December 31, 2011

    D.F., I somehow think of the expected longer solar flares in 2012 and the lack of repentance on the part of earth dwellers in the face of predicted new natural disasters. Your haiku packs a whollop!

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  6. Eric Alagan · January 1, 2012

    HAPPY NEW YEAR
    Wishing you all the best for 2012
    Eric 🙂

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  7. Lindy Lee · January 2, 2012

    “No sure repentance”– you are right on. Thoughtful haiku…

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  8. aaryaputhra · January 2, 2012

    “fire in a frigid hole”
    I can’t assume to get the emotional essence to these three lines… but I like the play on irony…

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  9. Three Well Beings · January 2, 2012

    I love that you experiment! Your versatility continues to draw me in! I rather enjoyed this haiku. I’m always curious as to what I interpret between the lines…not being sure of my own understanding, but isn’t that the fun part? Debra

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  10. Caddo Veil · January 2, 2012

    I like the last line best.

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  11. Angela · January 2, 2012

    Stray away, David! I love your poetry, whether accepted forms or not, it has such soul.

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