galactic crosshairs
fire in a frigid hole
no sure repentance
©copyright dfbarker 2011
*first of a few of these, I may stray from the ‘accepted’.
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Happy New Year 2012,,,, have fun 🙂
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Hi,
Have a great New Year. 🙂
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sometimes good to stray from the “accepted”… enjoyed this..
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Lovely! I wrote one book of haiku several years ago. A collection of my impressions of living in a new landscape…I printed it at home and hand-sewed and bound a set of ten small books. It was great fun 🙂 Haiku are wonderful for seeing the essence…for boiling down the sauce.
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D.F., I somehow think of the expected longer solar flares in 2012 and the lack of repentance on the part of earth dwellers in the face of predicted new natural disasters. Your haiku packs a whollop!
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HAPPY NEW YEAR
Wishing you all the best for 2012
Eric 🙂
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“No sure repentance”– you are right on. Thoughtful haiku…
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“fire in a frigid hole”
I can’t assume to get the emotional essence to these three lines… but I like the play on irony…
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I love that you experiment! Your versatility continues to draw me in! I rather enjoyed this haiku. I’m always curious as to what I interpret between the lines…not being sure of my own understanding, but isn’t that the fun part? Debra
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I like the last line best.
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Stray away, David! I love your poetry, whether accepted forms or not, it has such soul.
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