Haiku ‘Trinity’

Trinity

Scent of sweet woodsmoke
Beauty in indignation
Fresh ascetic breeze

Haiku and image © copyright df barker

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24 comments

  1. Pete Armetta · May 21, 2012

    It’s like being there friend. 🙂

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  2. Very nice haiku!

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  3. magsx2 · May 21, 2012

    HI,
    A great haiku. 🙂

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  4. susanjanejones · May 21, 2012

    Reminds me of camping holidays.

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  5. lscotthoughts · May 21, 2012

    I agree, I feel as though I’m there and would really love to be! Beautiful haiku, David!

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  6. Eve Redwater · May 21, 2012

    Mmm, woodsmoke! Delicious words David. 🙂

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  7. granbee · May 21, 2012

    This haiku captures various moments from many short camping trips and blends them into one sweet memory!

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  8. Louise Jaques · May 22, 2012

    This is delicious! No other words!

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  9. Betty Hayes Albright · May 22, 2012

    Lovely haiku – I’m breathing in that “fresh ascetic breeze”….

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  10. dfb · May 22, 2012

    Thank you Betty.

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  11. dfb · May 22, 2012

    Thank you very much, Louise!

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  12. dfb · May 22, 2012

    Thank you Eve!

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  13. dfb · May 22, 2012

    Thank you Lauren!

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  14. dfb · May 22, 2012

    Thank you so much mags!

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  15. Ina · May 22, 2012

    Hi David,
    lovely haiku and image, I hope you have a nice sunny day! (it is here)

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  16. Soma Mukherjee · May 22, 2012

    Beautiful both the image and the haiku,
    haiku alone painted such a beautiful picture 🙂

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  17. dfb · May 22, 2012

    Thank you Ina!

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  18. dfb · May 22, 2012

    Thank you Soma!!!

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  19. Victoria C. Slotto · May 22, 2012

    It’s rare that a “modern” haiku captures as much as you have here. Applause.

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  20. Caddo Veil · May 22, 2012

    I’ve been AWOL–glad I stopped by to catch this haiku–I like it very much.

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  21. dfb · May 22, 2012

    Hey, no problem! Just glad you dropped by – many thanks and I’m grateful. Must visit your site!

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  22. dfb · May 22, 2012

    I thank you Victoria!

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  23. Three Well Beings · May 23, 2012

    I love Haiku. This is delightful…I smell the smoke wafting in the breeze. Debra

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  24. dfb · May 23, 2012

    Thanks very much Debra!

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